Finished already? I just saw the WIP like 5 mins ago. >_>
The background looks fabulous! (L^_^)b
The text is kinda hard to see though, what if you put a bit of a white outline around the words? Or scratch that if you're pretty much done working on it.

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i am teh warrior of purgatory

nawww poor Axel

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Press For World Annihilation

LOL yeah.
Thanks man
Argh I hated trying to figure out the text lol. I might play around with it though. Thanks for the idea

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~A scattered dream that's like a far off memory, a far off memory that's like scattered dream.....I want to put the pieces together, your's and mine~~~

I know lol

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~A scattered dream that's like a far off memory, a far off memory that's like scattered dream.....I want to put the pieces together, your's and mine~~~

The method I use is to expand/feather the text selection then fill it in white on another layer.
See example for my watermark: [link]

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i am teh warrior of purgatory

ahhh yes. That's a good technique. Thanks man for that.

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~A scattered dream that's like a far off memory, a far off memory that's like scattered dream.....I want to put the pieces together, your's and mine~~~

Are you by chance adistantdream over on FFnet? This is A Spot of Bother - hello! Sorry, but FFnet cut part of the web address you sent me out.

Anyway. This. This is AWESOME. I love the colors - the background is beautiful, and I love the effect of Axel breaking apart into little wisps. And the quote!

This is coming along FABULOUSLY so far - if there's anything I can do to help, or any questions you have about certain scenes, please don't hesitate to let me know.

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They say I have A.D.D., but they just don't underst - hey look, a chicken.

Why yes, I am that person you're thinking of. Only not.

Why yes it is ^^ Hello. Oh man that blows.

Oh thankyou, thank you so much. I was a little worried. I've gotta change the writing on it though so it's a little better to understand

Ahh yes. I do have a question. Did you have anything in mind on what their clothes look like? Or what type of style you had in mind for each characters?

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~A scattered dream that's like a far off memory, a far off memory that's like scattered dream.....I want to put the pieces together, your's and mine~~~

Hm. I actually had to go back and skim. But other than a few concrete details, I didn't have anything definite in mind, no. Um. There were the multiple piercings in Axel's ears - just think silver all up and down his lobes. His favorite jacket is a full-length leather trenchcoat. [link] <-- Sort of like that, modeled on the Organization's jackets. Roxas's wardrobe mostly consisted of jeans, hoodies, or winter jackets, I think. Other than that, you can go in pretty much any direction you choose. ;D

Hey, thank YOU. I still can't believe you're undertaking transforming that monster into a full-length doujin.

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They say I have A.D.D., but they just don't underst - hey look, a chicken.

Why yes, I am that person you're thinking of. Only not.